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Thursday, August 22, 2019
The Day I Travelled to the Land of Medicines
Whoosh! as I arrived through the cloud into this new land. I looked around and everything looked different.It was like a Mountain of Medicines or a slide of pills that you can ride.”look its a goblin making a medicines”said rick “and look there over a pixe is making pills”said joe.and then it started to rain small pills that were blue pills.then the sun broke up and the rain died “look over theres a pool thats made out of blue medicines” said moonface and rick divide in to the pool and rick started to feel sick and started to vometed. then as they went into the woods and started to cut down the woods but the tree was a made out of green pills the leaf was a green medic.
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